Have you ever felt angry?

Question

Untitled Rant

by C.S. Scotkin

Lack of human feeling,

save your twisted braid

of scorn, haughty

self absorbed anger

when others dared

to dream your dream

more bravely,

has undone you.

No compassion now,

just pity for a shell

empty… spiritual

suicide and fear.

Flawed gift.

Answer 1

You drink from a much shared bottle, Dear.

Answer 2

Well worded poem. interesting,

But  am wondering,

"It is human to error."

So would it not be,

"Lack of Spiritual feeling."

Unless I am missing your message,

that would be my thought.

Answer 3

I feel only disappointment...nothing more need be said.

Answer 4

You said it well!

Let's hope for peace, today and always.

Answer 5

Sunday morning dark here? Whoa!  Compassion does need to be earned.  

Answer 6

Angry, livid and fuming mad,

All of these emotions.

Good thing, I feel at times,

There is not such a potion.

Lack of understanding,No,

Dreams Yes, I've had Broken.

Compassion for another,

I hold with such devotion.

Empty,Is how I feel

That there's no denying,

and for this I am at Fault,

It Is I that feels like dieing.

Answer 7

wow. excellent poem.

really entails the emotions one experiences when an anger burst is triggered. i simply adore the lines: "-to dream your dream more bravely,". really, those lines did it for me. they were so power and full of dense meaning.

poetry embodies the power of words...and that is exactly what your poem did!

thank you:]