Have you ever felt like?

Question

You were taken off of the feet of life,

And cast on the floor.

Stepped on and stepped over.

Like you were caught between the world's

Index finger,

And it's thumb, and flung into the hamper.

Until God came!

Washing away the pain and that dirty feeling.

He gets the ring off your collar,

Cleansing you on the right cycle.

He keeps enough change,

To dry our tears.

I'm so glad Jesus doesn't need Downy.

Yet His Mercy softens us.

His Power and Love strengthens us.

Answer 1

Please don't change a word.  Sometimes the simplest words ring clearest.  It was washing day through the eyes and ears of the Lord with your words.  There need be no revisions.  God has gifted you with a talent.  This is pure beauty.  Thank you.

Answer 2

wow, impressive!!

Answer 3

Yes, I have felt like that several times, but could never put words to it.

Isn't God the very best, look at the wonderful gift He has given you.

To be able to write feelings in a way that are helpful to others, & beautiful too.

It's amazing.

A gift that has obviously escaped me.

Answer 4

You have a beautiful spirit Semper, thank you for this lovely expression you've shared.

*edit* To "Me" - I've never understood why someone would offer to change a personal expression of faith. The only thing to correct would be your manners.

Don't change a thing Semp, after all, it is perfection.

Answer 5

Yes. Do you mind some revisions? If not, read on. If so, you are allowed to hate me.

You were taken off of the wheel of life,

And cast onto the mud-stained floor

Stepped on, stepped over,

Caught between the world's

Index finger and thumb,

flung into the hamper--

Until the Lord came!

Washing off the hurt and the scars and the dirt

He slips the ring off your collar,

Cleansing you on the right cycle.

He keeps enough change,

To dry our tears.

I'm so glad Jesus doesn't need Downy.

His mercy cleanses us,

his power strengthens us,

and his unending Love

stays with us forever

for us to lean upon

in times of trouble.

Answer 6

I am blessed by your gift.<><

Answer 7

very nice !

Answer 8

No but i bet my dog has felt all that stepping on!

Answer 9

lol i guess that's.  original

Answer 10

absolutly

Answer 11

Great