Have you ever found it difficult?

Question

"Keeping a Secret Safe" - minute poem

My heart leaps when I see your smile,

please stay a while,

please stay with me

eternally.

I carve initials with your knife,

stay in my life,

stronger than fear

I need you here.

It's hard at first, but just believe,

my gift receive.

Fading never,

love forever.

I trust you, dear, in everything

the truth I sing.

We cannot part,

you hold my heart.

Answer 1

As I hold you close to me, to my heart. I remember stuff from a while back and find out new parts everyday. It all pulls me closer. I shall stay as long as you keep carving. Don't put down the knife I gave you. I am here as long as you keep your heart in the flame. With it our souls mesh. So beautiful, better than heaven could ever be described. I receive it, but I take it cautiously for fear of what might happen. For it has happened many before. No one has been able to stay in the flame for too long. I am trouble for many. My heart burns with fiery, engulfing passion. It does not wane. But yet to my amazement, just when I think it should go out, it burns brighter and more fierce.

I love you, Evadne.

Answer 2

Shhhhhhh...Safe inside us all

Answer 3

If in my hands I hold your heart,

Then we can never ever part.

More to follow later.  Time to go home now.

Answer 4

This is a well spent minute!  Thanks.  Your first stanza hit me, I was hooked!

Answer 5

Said well and read well in about a minute!

Answer 6

There is so much neediness implied here. I don't think it is much different from what most people here. It's just a lot more honest than most can be about it. I think that, more than the excellence of your artistry, is what makes you so easy to love.

Answer 7

don't know what you're asking, but that poem is very good.  Nice rhythm and rhyming.