Have you ever really looked at the sky?

Question

The sky,

a master artists

pallet where aqua,

ultra blue, edged

with titanium white

are unified with spatula,

softened with number ten

brush of the finest bristle.

Unformed clouds are born,

to be fluffed into metamorphic

balls of cotton wool.

Answer 1

Night sky is better...

A face of a lover made beautiful by its light,

Glitter alive strewn across to its ends

Answer 2

I always love looking up at the colors and images in the sky. This a perfect description of the beauty above us.

Answer 3

the sky, the thing that keeps us in

Answer 4

Have you?

Answer 5

very well described.Well in a way i have looked at the the sky in a way and the other no not really.But i do believe the sky is all you say of it and it is neverending.........LOL..............

Answer 6

I dabble with paint as well as words, and you have this just right!

Answer 7

Amen!

Answer 8

A soothing poem as usual. I've been looking at the sky since ages ago. What i'm aching to see right now is your mysterious poetic face! ;-)

Answer 9

mm.... k.....   i know a doctor want his card?

Answer 10

I have looked at the sky--but never in this way...

Answer 11

nice i really like that :)

Answer 12

Your poem is appropriate for the Beautiful SKY!!!

Answer 13

awesome poem!

really pretty!

quite odd!

but yea!

ive really looked at the sky!

but i live in the city and i cant see the stars at night!

Answer 14

.....o...k?

Answer 15

A brilliant description and unique. Very well done. My compliments.

Answer 16

yes.

yes, i have.

interestingly strange poem.

hmm...

xx

Answer 17

I was groovin' along just fine, until I hit that tree...

Answer 18

Yes ... when I feel boring ... the sky is blue with white clouds ...

sometimes grey before it's going to rain ...

Answer 19

I loved the theme of this piece, but felt the line breaks were like hitting a brick wall except for the last three lines. Also, I have to ask: is agua a color? I've never run across it as a paint before. And pallet makes me think of a pallet, not the canvas being described in the rest of the poem. If I may make a suggestion:

The sky,

A master artist canvas,

Where Cerulean

And Ultramarine

Edged with Titanium,

Are unified by knife,

And softened

By the fine bristles

Of a No. ten brush

Unformed clouds are born,

Fluffed into metamorphic

Balls of cotton wool.

This is by no means an attempt on my part to rewrite your poem--it is purely meant as an example of what I thought might be a clearer version of what the poem said to me.

To answer your question: Yes, I have seen the sky--and it is the hardest thing I've ever tried to paint. For some reason I don't work with the blues very well.

I hope I was of some help without sounding rude or obnoxious--if I came off sounding that way I apologize.

Answer 20

Nice descriptions and images.

Answer 21

A view of the sky from a poet's interpretation of an artist's composition - gives a whole new perspective ♥

Answer 22

BARF!

you fail it!

Answer 23

Yes, then a bird pooped in my eye!

Howz that for a great rhym?

Answer 24

Lovely! And yes I really have looked at the sky.