Have you ever wanted to fly?

Question

CloudRush

Wings burst into air unbound

Wind shakes them to flight

while feathers fly

and I watch the slowly fading ground

This is my time

to see the world

from heavens vantage point

In many colors

the fields and valleys

create a moving

Mosaic spreading to the four corners

Rivers and glens

appearing like spider threads

When in flight

my only wish is to never

have the need to land

I could sleep up here

never wake

Now

would you soar with me?

-Upbeat much? I have always wanted to fly. I think this wish is shared by many… have a captured that wish in any way?

Blessed Be, in Love, Life and the dream of Wings, Siren

Answer 1

Merry meet! I've flown and I've flown.  In reality and in my imagination.  On the wings of eagles and in the cockpit of an attack helicopter.   I have ridden the wind.  I have earned my wings.  I was a warrior.  Blessed be thou, beautiful dreamer!

Answer 2

To soar like an eagle would be a fantasy delight, I watch

birds and sometimes wish to fly off with them, for just a time!

Nice poem, feels of freedom.

Answer 3

Dear Icarus, I'm sorry to melt your wax, but  some things here are making you crash land. First, the first letters: convention at one time demanded that they be capitalized, modern standards are more relaxed. But if you put something in a poem, you should have a good reason to do so. What brought this to my attention was "Mosaic." The word "mosaic" refers to a picture made of small pieces of tile. But when you capitalize it, it means "pertaining to Moses." And I happen to know that he had a strong aversion to flying. Writing a poem can be a lot like piloting a plane, one mistake can bring you crashing down. I'm taking the bus, wait for me.

Answer 4

yes, i would love to fly. for me it means freedom

Answer 5

i have ALWAYS wanted to fly. ive have multiple dreams where i have flown, its so cool haha

Answer 6

I wish I could fly but I am scared even in dreams

my clipped wings weren't built for flight

Nice visuals

Answer 7

I love the view from the air - do not like airplanes though. Here is a sight that you can tour the whole world - zoom down to house level - and never leave the comfort of your chair. Since my family is scattered - I check on the well being - of their houses - this way. Enjoy ♥

http://www.heavens-above.com/