Have you seen this before? Granny's rap.?

Question

Hi, folks I posted this some time ago....no one responded, so I checked it out....not there (if it shows up twice I apologise)

My lot in life

in my allotted span

is to do what I can,

to be what I am.

I am the sum of all my parts.

Heart, mind and soul.

My role?

My ultimate goal?

Simply to seize the day

Throw nothing away.

To enjoy my slotted span.

To prolong

for as long as I can

this life, in all its majesty.

No travesty, pure rhapsody.

Clasping me,

supporting me

through the highs and lows.

God alone knows

where everything goes.

Tomorrow may bring sorrow,

but, I know that joy

will follow.

Diurnal and eternal

Light and darkness,

darkness and light.

My place in the scheme of things?

To soar with golden wings,

to savour what life brings.....

Is this why my heart sings?

(I like these hydropro things.........not part of rhyme, just a comment!)

Answer 1

RAP on Granny .. RAP on.. It looks good on you!

(I am tapping out.. my muse is done gone)

Your creative talent is soaring!  I love it !

Answer 2

High five Grannyjill!

Answer 3

Love it Thank you for that.There is one that refers to someone who comes to you when they are in need and then when all is well do not bother to call that I really like.

I give you this present.

It did not cost me anything.

Hold it feel it caress it.

When you have opened it and find you do not want it.

Do not throw it away.

Put it in a cupboard for one day you may find you will need it.

The present is my Heart

Hope you like this one too

Answer 4

Carpe diem indeed.  Nice to try other forms isn't it?  

Answer 5

Take it to the streets, sister, sing it loud! This is a wonderful format, and you amaze me constantly with your versatility, from the classical forms to the emulation of the greats to random street rhyme. I love it. Thank you for your constant inspiration.

Answer 6

You rock, Granny!

Your versatility amazes me.

Answer 7

Granny J.!

you go girl,

what a pearl,

rhyme sublime

to wake up to

brighten up my day!

Yay!

Answer 8

Go G Jill go

Listen to her throw

Down the sound

Life going round

Straight to the heart

The place to start

The day off

Don't lay off

Just stay off the dark

Days in the park

Sing meadowlark

Lemon sweet words

From the birds

Blue bird that brings

G Jill her wings

So she can fly

I'm out

Answer 9

Yo Go the Gran! Dig it I do! You got the swagger on this one. Excellent! Word! Fully sick! (that's VERY good GJ)

Answer 10

Jill, you never cease to amaze me.  As Elaine pointed out, your versatility and creativity is just astounding.   Your poetry is never dull.

Excellent job...lots of fun.

Answer 11

You may have given a reason for living - "to do what I can, to be what I am".  How often one searches - for the ultimate reason for their life - when the answer may be a simple statement - to be what I am.  Thank you, Granny ♥

Answer 12

You da bomb.

Answer 13

i do enjoy all poetry and i like that aswell its slightly different,it flows well,i got a bit muddled ,towards the end,but like said its meant,but there again i will never make a good rapper,i agree life is to short with to much hurt and pain,we have to make the best we can with whatever we do have,peAce.

Answer 14

Little ole lady from Pasadena....

Go Granny, go Granny, go Granny, go....

Grannyjill has a shiny red super-stock pen instead of car.

Answer 15

This is WONDERFUL!

Very inspirational rappin' Granny...

*Peace*