Have you time for nine lines?

Question

"Secrets" - musette

So long,

it's my fault, dear,

I'm wrong.

My crime

I can't describe,

no time.

Farewell,

someday, love, I

will tell.

Information on the musette - http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/musette.html

Answer 1

Purely you means purely extraordinary!

Answer 2

So short--

As woman's love;

C'est mort.

So long--

Have back your glove,

And song.

So far--

What proof thereof?

Your scar.

Answer 3

Bid me

open my eyes

for lies!

Secrets,

whispers kept dark

truth where?

Good bye

trust no longer

Go Now!

Interesting format, I don't know if I got it right, but I liked yours.

Answer 4

Who cares

not I

(ha ha)

deep sigh.

Would this be called a snapshot? Neon gave me that word,

I think it fits.

Answer 5

Some wanna know's comment is perfect. And it describes you perfectly also.

Answer 6

I like it.

But it makes me think that someone had been cheated on, and the person who cheated realizes his mistake. But he also realizes that whomever he wants to be with is not happy with the way things are. So he is letting go of the past and moving on with out her, for the sake of her happiness.

atleast that is what i got out of it...

Answer mine please:

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Answer 7

worst.....poem.....ever

Answer 8

nice!

Answer 9

I like it.

I like it a lot.

It is simple, vague, & just as you say: Secretive.

Answer 10

no time

no time for secrets

heartbreaking

for those who look to closely

Answer 11

Have a visual of a business woman - dressed in pink suit - rushing to the door - late for a meeting.  Good bye, my love - no time to discuss further - I'm late - but the time - we were together was great. Call me later - and out the door. ♥