Have you time for three lines?

Question

The Quiet - senryu?

Step, whisper softly,

you will find beauty profound

in silence alone.

Answer 1

I alway have time for three lines.  Very complete, masterful.

Answer 2

I leap, and scream in fear

It is beauty exquisite and profound

I am alive and I'm still here

The taxi did not run me down.

Answer 3

You have created yet another small masterpiece.  This one is serene and captivating in its simplicity, yet speaks volumes about tranquility and beauty.  Very lovely.  Thank you.

Answer 4

very nice 5-7-5 haiku

Answer 5

Brings to mind - quietly walking through the forest - hoping to see some wildlife. The anticipation - the silence - then the reward - you see a deer ♥

Answer 6

ah, haiku.  it's beautiful.  but i wonder, if it says to whisper, why is it also saying that it is silent, and that you will find beauty in it.  for steps and whispers, although soothing and soft, are not silent.

Answer 7

And in this haiku

There is wisdom beyond words

That few comprehend.

Answer 8

With your permission, I'm going to recite that to memory. I could use that in every single conversation I have--with anybody.

Answer 9

Beautiful Haiku. It speaks volumes with so little words, exactly what a Haiku should do. :)

Answer 10

WOW In eleven words you said it all.LOUD AND CLEAR.

Answer 11

I'm paying attention.

EDIT: We do have this lunar/planetary relationship, since the first day.

Answer 12

I enjoy silence, this speaks well.

Answer 13

Nicely done.  

Answer 14

Nice, soft, enjoyable haiku

Answer 15

I find more beauty in your lines few

than I could in any silence.

ma

Answer 16

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