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Have you too been to that strange and exotic place; Mood Island?

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A STRANGE AND SOMETIMES

WONDERFUL PLACE

Washed ashore,

upon the Island of Mood,

Fear and Apprehension greeted me

and I was consumed by Doubt.

I was Lonely, all alone.

My ship was Sunken,

my raft, Deflated, punctured.

The Melancholy of swaying palms

soon did Calm my nerves.

As my wits grew Coherent

and me, Curious, I climbed

the highest hill and Rested for a moment.

I saw a lush forest Swelling,

I heard the birds Excited,

I felt the sun’s soothing Hot mass

warm the air and Relax me.

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  1. Very funny, TD. However, I like all your moods. I like never knowing what you are going to come up with next.


  2. Nice write, very calming and peaceful.  I really liked the second stanza as I can relate and often feel that way.

  3. Quite indigo.

  4. I've just departed Elaine's mood island.  I am hoping my island's mood results in your depiction.  (It has been too dark and air wet for oh so long!)

  5. Beautiful images. We're all moody from time to time.

  6. Did you spot Tom Hanks?  Amazing how the mind can fly through moods.  I always like hills better.  Good one.

  7. Can you give me directions because I'm lost on the Island of Despair. There has been such an influx of souls here lately that we are running out of power to run the place. I can't even sit alone on the beach without someone crying on my tears... d@mn it someone sat on Wilson.

  8. "Hi!",

    Beautiful written poem.

    WELL DONE!

    cheers : )

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