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Help.....Finish this Poem...?

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I wrote this like 7 years ago, but i cant finish it... i dont know if its a start mid or end .. but i know i like it - lol ....

"Heven's on overload,

h**l is gonna burst,

People dont care anymore,

Not seeming to realise,

What they do with a knife...

Might just affect them in there afterlife"

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  1. Do people notice those matching pairs of overloads?

    There has to be somewhere to be; a place to go.

    Still, we all react to situations in this life, though

    It's hard to judge reactions in a life that you don't know.


  2. how long do u want it to be? i can give you another stanza-

    Hear the silent scream,

    Drawn with a silver tip,

    The worlds blackest moments.

    No ones can grasp,

    We struggle in each task,

    Just to make time pass.

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