please help me edit this poem and if you see something u would like changed to make it sound better please tell me :) ( it needs two poetic devices please help )i guess i got the idea from a song i heard (imaginary friend) so i decided to name my hamster Benjamin after this song =D
When you left me i feel back,
now my world is painted black,
my world is slowly being torn apart,
when you decided to take my heart,
you where my only friend,
you said you would love me till the end,
others claimed you where imaginary,
i disclaimed and said "oh contrary",
To me you surely where real,
in my youth you where the biggest deal,
you may have left me my imaginary friend,
but ill always remember you sweet Benjamin.
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