Help finish my story, I'm stuck part 3?

Question

I need help finishing it, any ideas?? Make sure to read all three parts. Part 1, is Help finish my story, I'm stuck part1, Part 2 is.....Help finish my story, I'm stuck part 2.

His bright blue eyes glittered when I entered. I stayed by the door.

For a few minutes, neither of us said anything.

"So," he said.

"Why are you here?" I blurted.

"Isn't it obvious?"

"No."

Another long minute of awkward silence followed.

"I want you to tutor me."

"Why should I?"

"Because you’re the best in the class."

"Go find someone else."

Another minute of silence, I looked away and when I looked back, I saw he had stepped right up to my face. I sucked in my breath. I could see he had long dark eyelashes; his blue eyes had a hint of green, very faint. His skin was half tanned. He blinked.

"Please."

"S-Step back," I warned.

He stared at me; slightly frowning then stepped back.

"I'll have police in the room when I get tutored," he said slowly.

I look away.

"Please, I'm not dumb, I just need a little of extra help," He said.

I felt myself giving in. I don’t know why, but if I gave in, would he leave me alone forever?

"If I tutor you," I pause, "will you promise to leave me alone after?"

"Forever?"

"Avoid me in the halls, sit on the other side of the room," I stare right into his eyes. His eyes are so bright that I couldn’t see any emotions.

"Deal."

That’s when he stepped forward, leaned in, and gave me a gentle hug, before turning and walking out. I didn’t know if I wanted to slap him, yell it him, or what. But it was too late now.

"How did it go," my mother asked anxiously, "he didn’t hurt you did he? Is he gone?"

"He's gone," I say, my lips slightly tingling. "I'm going to go up and do some homework."

"Okay, call if you need anything."

I grabbed my bag and ran upstairs, and jumped onto my bed. No, I couldn’t like him. I couldn’t let myself feel anything. I wasn’t going to tell Will, he'd flip.

The phone started ringing, and before I picked it up, I thought, maybe he's not so bad.

However, after I'd picked up the phone, I wasn’t so sure.

Meredith had gone missing, and Conner had escaped from the police.

Answer 1

That was amazing! Definetely worth reading! You're a superb author. The story really pulls you in with the emotions. I was a little confused though. Why would he want police in the room when he's tutored? It was a great story excerpt, and I would definetely read the story when it's published! Good luck and happy reading :)

Answer 2

d**n thats a good story.....I'm mesmerized already...I think you should say at the ending that :

I didn't know which was worse : the fact that ________________________or that I had fallen for him without hesitation.

The thought of him made my body feel numb. I felt that cold stare from his blue eyes going through me.

I don't know the rest of your story so I can't say the ending without facts well thats all i can do

Answer 3

YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS!!!!!

ohhh-emmm-geee this is goooddd.

i think that she should still tutor him, like the next day or something, and he should act like he didn't take meredith.

but you'll have to come up with a reason that he took her bestfriend.

i like it.

Answer 4

dude now go in flashback and rell the reaaders how he beat the main character up or what bad this he did( state incidents)

then in next part(guss5) you are tutouring him and you ask him why does he do it. He says so situation changed him( on incident) like so one beat him to death and now he is angry on every body or some thing.

I love how you write is amezing, your style is perfect, for help e-mail me at [e-mail] , and please tell me that it is you because I get many advertise emails and I delet them all.