Help fix my Yugioh Zombie Deck

Question

This is what I have in mind...(note-trying to avoid crush card and il blud since they are pretty expensive to add on to everything):

Monsters:

1x Morphing Jar

2x ryu kokki

3x goblin zombie

2x plague wolf

3x pyramid turtle

3x zombie master

1x card trooper

1x sangan

2x giant rat

1x neo-spacian grand mole

1x spirit reaper

1x snipe hunter

Spells:

3x Book of Life

1x Heavy Storm

1x Monster Reborn

2x Creature Swap

1x Nobleman of Crossout

3x Card of Safe Return

1x Premature Burial

1x Brain Control

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Nobleman of Extermination

1x Smashing Ground

Traps:

2x Deck Devastation Virus

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Dust Tornado

Side Deck:

2x Allure of Darkness

3x Inferno Reckless Summon

Please help me improve my deck! Thank you =)

Answer 1

Here is a start you can work off of since I can see you have a lot of cards that don't really need to be played.  

monsters

[2-3]Despair from the Dark

[3]Zombie Master

[3]Ryu Kokki

[3]Mezuki (look this up if you don't know what it does)

[3]Goblin Zombie

[3]Pyramid Turtle

[2-3]D.D. Crow

then try some of these Sangan, Spirit Reaper, Snipe Hunter, Neo-Spacacian Grand Mole, and Destiny Hero Disk Commander.

spells

[3]Card of Safe Return

[3]Book of Life

[1-3]Lightning Vortex

[1-2]Burial from a Different Dimension (for mezuki or if your cards get hit by an opponents D.D. Crow)

then of course Monster Reborn and Premature.

traps

[3]Solemn Judgment (or any other counter trap you want if you can't get Solemn, or even run 2 Royal Decree here)

[1-2]Limit Reverse (only if you use Disk Commander and don't use Decree)

the Torrential Tribute and Mirror Force.

This is a basic list to give you ideas, hope it helps.