Help!! i need help with party invites!?

Question

My daughter (gabriella) and my nephew (j.c) were born exactly 1 yr apart so my sister and i are throwing their birthday parties together. Gabriella is turning 2 and J.C is turning 1, does anyone have any cute lil poems, sayings that can go on the invites, I'm making them with Print Workshop and want them to be unique. Their theme is Dora and Diego's Birthday Fiesta and we are having Mexican food and appetizers and stuff like that. i had one that says....

J.C is the BIG 1

and

Gabriella is finally 2

so come on amigos

we wanna celebrate with you!!!

and then i would give all the info..does anyone have anything that sounds more cute. i know i wanna have their ages and possibly something about them being cousins in there. can anyone help!!

Answer 1

The content is okay, but the rhythm is a bit off.  How about something like:

Come on amigos, forget your siesta--

Join us for fun at our birthday fiesta!

J.C's turning one, Gabriella turns two,

And our party just won't be the same without you!

(Hold on, and I'll see if I can come up with something better).

EDIT:  Actually, now that I think about it, I would just keep it short and sweet, anf then add the details after the poem.