Help improve/rate my Batteryman Deck for Yu-gi-oh?

Question

MONSTERS: 14

(3) Batteryman AA

(3) Batteryman C

(2) Batteryman D

(2) Batteryman Micro-Cell

(3) Shining Angel

(1) Penguin Soldier

Magic:17

(3) Inferno Reckless Summon

(2) Battery Charger

(1) Short Circuit

(1) Quick Charger

(1) Premature Burial

(1) Different Dimension Capsule

(1) A Feather Of The Phoenix

(1) Heavy Storm

(1) Fissure

(1) Mystical Space Typhoon

(1) Monster Reborn

(1) Reload

(1) Lightning Vortex

(1) Swords Of Revealing Light

Traps: 9

(1) Portable Battery Pack

(1)Sakuretsu Armor

(1) Waboku

(1) Raigeki Break

(1) Magic Jammer

(1) Torrential Tribute

(1) Pharaoh's Treasure

(1) Trap Hole

(1) Magic Cylinder

Please keep in mind that my cards are limited and I do not have Super-Electromagnetic Voltech Dragon or Zaborg the Thunder Monarch. I am working on getting them and more Short Circuits. This deck is mostly for OTK with Batteryman AA. Pharaoh's Treasure, Feather of the Phoenix, and Different Dimension Capsule are used to get Short Circuit since I only have one. Plz comment.

Answer 1

Definitely add more monsters!!! You'll keep drawing spell & trap cards when you need monsters!! Throw in some monsters that'll go well with your deck.

Answer 2

Whats up i run i batteryman and entered regionals and placed pretty well.

You just have battery stuff lighten up . This is a fun deck. Her i'll give you a deck list to work with.

Monsters:

2* Honest

1* Super Electromagnetic Voltech Dragon

2* Guardian of Order

1* The Creator

3* Shining Angel

3* Batteryman AA

3* Batteryman Micro-Cell

3* Batteryman D

3* Batteryman Charger

2* The Calculator

2* Batteryman Industrial Strength

Spells:

3* Infernal Reckless Summon

3* Battery Charger

2* Short Circuit

1* Monster Reborn

1* Card of Safe Return

1* Premature Burial

1* Reload

Traps:

3* Portable Battery Pack

1* Magic Jammer

1* Limit Reverse

1* Threatening Roar

Explain

- Batteryman C has no effect in a battery deck because first of all its effect only works on machines and batteries are thunder.

- I'm not trying to be mean at all but your OTK is horrible there is a lot more ways to demolish your opponent. First play face down Batteryman Micro-Cell and Infernal Reckless Summon. Your opponent  attacks and you get Micro-Cells effect to draw and special summon a batteryman monster with 1500 attack or less bring out Batteryman AA and flip Infernal Reckless Summon and you get 3 Batteryman AA with 3000 attack each then Short Circuit there field.

- Honest works awesome with a batteryman deck. Imagine you have 2 Batteryman AA and you opponent attacks with Jinzo you can tribute Honest and the 2000 attack Batteryman AA gains the attack of the attacking monster