Help in english homework!!?

Question

so i have to write an classification essay in english about different types of heros i no stupid topic but i just wanted to no how my intro sounds? be honest please! and is that semi collon in the right place?

its:

What type of person is able to give inspiration and aid? What type of person, a hero. There are many types of heros in which we can all relate to. Though everyone has the ability to be a hero, few are able to make a difference wheather it’s saving someones life, helping you out, or just being there for you; we call them personal heros

Answer 1

dude its great i couldnt do any better ....umm yah but im only

in 8th soooooooooooo??????/

Answer 2

Your intro is ok but you want to capture your reader's attention and keep it, so that they will want to continue reading. Just a suggestion but maybe you think of someone that you consider a hero and write what they have done to make them a hero in your eyes. This way the reader is curious and will want to read more.

Answer 3

What type of person is able to give inspiration and aid? What type of person, [a hero]. There are many types of heros in which we can all relate to. Though everyone has the ability to be a hero, few are able to make a difference wheather it’s saving someones life, helping you out, or just being there for you; we call them [personal heros]

what youre ending with is not the same subjct as with what youre starting off with. use a comma not a semi colon

make it the same subject and itll sound a little better

Answer 4

I think it would sound better if you started it this way. A hero is a type of person who is able to give inspiration and aid.    

Also you spelled whether wrong, its not weather its whether.