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Question

is this right? i will right letter to my manager and it goes like this.

Please find the attached overtime list of your employee that have been paid for the month of June 2008.

(what i mean is i will forward the list of employee who has given payment for their overtime last june (for review)). many thanks.

Answer 1

I'd word it differently.

Please see the attached list of your employees who have been paid overtime for the month of June 2008.

Answer 2

Yes thats around the same thing i write when my manager asks for a list. Dont worry it sounds fine, Trust me :]