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Question

is my grammar correct? please help... this letter will send to the secretary of the director.

Good day mam,

I am writing to you to follow up my applications. I went there last week to apply as machine operator. Does the director has reviewed my cv?

hope to hear from you.

Is this correct if i will send her a letter liek that? i dont need any opinion or whatever just correct my grammar and u will be awarded for giving me a nice answer.

Answer 1

If you know her name address her by it since you were there you should know it. Not using it in this case is considered rude and inconsiderate. As is too whom it may concern in this case.

up on my application, not up my applications.

Would you be able to inform me if the director has reviewed my CV.

BTW a machine operator should have a resume not a cv. CVs are generally for jobs that require a post graduate degree or a professional certification. Not a trades license. Appearing pretentious could cost you a job.  Avoid it.

For others who ask a CV is a Curriculum Vitae or circle of life, It includes all education experience etc and is much longer than a resume.

Answer 2

This is thecorrect way

To  whom it  may  concern

I  am writing to follow u  on my application. I applied  last  week as 'machine oprareter'

Could  you please  give  me an answer if you have  reviwed   my  CV   or  not.

Hope  to her fom you  soon.

Truely  yours

Your name

Answer 3

What you have listed is pretty casual for a job scenario.  You might try something like:

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to follow up on an application I submitted last week for a position as machine operator and was wondering if the Director had reviewed my CV yet.  Please contact me at your earliest convienience with any questions or comments you may have.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Thank You,

Xxxxxxxxxxxx

If you like what you already had, here's the new and improved version of the grammar:

Good day Ma'am,

I am writing to you to follow up my applications. I went there last week to apply as machine operator. Has the director reviewed my CV?

Hope to hear from you soon.

Thank you,

Xxxxxxxxxx

Good Luck! *fingers crossed*

Answer 4

Revised:

To Whom It May Concern,

I am writing to follow up with you on my applications that I have submitted. I applied for the position of machine operator with your company last week and was curious to know if you have made a decision. I hope to hear from you soon.  

Sincerely,

Answer 5

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to follow up my applications. I went there last week to apply as machine operator. Please could you inform me when the director has reviewed my CV.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Kind regards,

yourname

Answer 6

last sentence- Has the director reviewed my CV?

hope this helps

Answer 7

Good Morning Madam,

My name is - I applied for a position with your company as a machine operator last week on the - of - 2007.  I am in the habit of following up an Interview with written word and another copy of my resume.

Please note attached document and do not hesitate to contact me if you need further information.

Thank you

-

Answer 8

You need to write something like this,

To whom it may Concerns,

I am writing to do a follow up on my Application I put in with your company last week. I hope all my information was up to the qualifications for the job of Machine operator. Hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,

Your name here.

Answer 9

I would go with this:

To whom it may concern,

I am writing to follow up with you on my application. I was in last week to apply for the machine operator position. Has the director had the time to review my cv? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely, your name

Short and sweet is good. I hope this helps.

P.S. What is a cv?

Answer 10

To Whom it may Concern,

I am writing as a follow up to my application.  I interviewed for a machine operator  position on (enter week day) September (enter date), 2007.  

I appreciate that the director took the time to speak with me and I'm very interested in the position.  I hope to here back.

Sincerely,

(enter full name)

(enter phone number or e-mail address)

Answer 11

Good day ma'am,

I am writing to you to follow up my application for machine operator. I went there last week to apply and I just want to inquire if the director has reviewed my Curriculum Vitae.

Hope to hear from your kind office.

It would be better if you avoid making abbreviations such as "CV" so that it would be much clearer to the reader.

I hope this helps.

Good day.

Answer 12

Good day mam,

I am writing to you to follow up my application. I went there last week to apply as machine operator. Has the director reviewed my cv?

Hope to hear from you.

Answer 13

To Whom it May Concern:

I am writing to you to follow up with my application. I applied at your place of business last week as a machine operator. Has the director reviewed my application? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

(Name)

Answer 14

Good day,

I am writing to you to follow up on my applications. I visited last week to apply for a machine operator position. Has the director had the opportunity to review my cv? Please don't hesitate to contact me with any follow-up questions.

Sincerely,

Your name

Answer 15

Good day ma'am,

I am writing to you to follow up on my applications. I applied at your company earlier in the week as a machine operator. Has the director reviewed my CV? Hope to hear from you.

Sincerely,

(your name)

Good Luck!

Answer 16

try something like...

Date (17th September, 2007)

Your address and phone contact

Dear (do you know their name) or Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to you to follow-up my recent application for the position of 'Machine Operator'.

Could you please advise if the position has being filled.

Pick one of the following...

As outlined in my CV, I believe I have the experience and knowledge to be a productive member of your team.

Or

As outlined in my CV, I am hard working and willing to learn and believe, given the chance, that I could become a productive member of your team.

If I have being unsuccessful for this application, I would be interested in any future positions and request that my CV be held on file. I can be contacted at the above address and phone number/s.

Kind regards

Bob Smith (the builder)

Good luck.

Answer 17

Sept. 17, 2007

Jane Doe

1234 Main St.

SomeCity, NY 12345

Re:  Application

Dear Ms. Doe,

This is to follow up on my application which I submitted to your company recently for the position of machine operator.

Please let me know about the status of my application at your earliest convenience. If any question, please call me at 972-555-1234, or send correspondence to the following address.

Sincerely,

Joe Smith

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Answer 18

try this:

To who it may concern,

Last week I applied for a position as a machine operator and am inquiring to whether or not the director has yet reviewed my CV.  I hope to hear from you.

Sincerely,

YOUR NAME

Answer 19

Even if the letter will be read by the secretary, you should write it as to the director. The letter you wrote seems rather informal, and not very businesslike. If it were me, *I* would follow proper business writing protocol and write,

Name of director

position in the company (ie Director of Fine Machines)

street address of the business

city and state of business

space

date

space

Dear (director's title and last name, Ms. ?)

space

I wish you good day. I applied at (business name)  last week to fill the position of machine operator and am writing to inquire as to whether my resume has been reviewed.

I am eager to work at (business name), so please feel free to contact me as needed with additional questions or information.

Most sincerely,

Your name

your contact numbers

Answer 20

This is how it should be written:

Dear Madam,

I am writing to you to follow up on my application.for the position of Machine Operator, which  I submitted personally last week.

Would you please let me know whether it has been reviewed by the person in charge?  I would appreciate your answer as soon as convenient.

Yours sincerely,

(Your Name)

Answer 21

Good day ma'am,

I am writing to you to follow up on my applications. I was there last week to apply as machine operator. Has the director reviewed my CV?

I hope to hear from you soon.