Help me find a poem??

Question

I have been searching for days for a poem for my husband. We don't have the best relationship, and we have both been trying really hard to make it work. I want a poem about making love work, and it takes two people. Something on those lines. If anyone knows of a poem please please let me know. I can't write a poem to save my butt, but I really want to save my marrige. - Thanks

Answer 1

you won t save your marriage with a poem...you must show your husband you really love him and that you would do anything to keep him by your side...a poem doesn t do miracles. I can tell you because my parents are divorced and I found the right a poem to say how much I kneeded them to be together, but there were other things I didn t understand immediately

Answer 2

Here's something I just wrote for you and your husband.  I hope you like it and decide to use it.  In any case, good luck; and I hope everything works out for you both.

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I want you to know I truly love you with all my heart and soul,

Marrying you and being your wife will always be my life's greatest role.

I know we've had our ups and down; mostly good times though a few were bad,

But I don't want to ever lose you  --  to do so would make me forever sad.

So, lets try to get together and talk about where we both went wrong

Finding the answers to whatever problems exist will only make our love more strong.

Once this is all behind us, we can begin again with a clean slate

And remember how our love blossomed from our very first date ...

Answer 3

why not a little bit of shakesphere?

Answer 4

Water Weep for Me

By Victoria Tarrani

(© 0807.06)

This morning I watched you sleep,

and my heart filled with joy

then it broke.

How many harsh words

I said that I didn't mean

and don't remember

can I mend them by

sharing memories

with you?

I remember a day with laughter,

running along the beach,

and in the quiet darkness,

against the sounds

of melodic waves,

holding each other

and making love.

We can go back

to that beach,

we can recapture

the innocence and

passion that holds us

together even though

the ebbing flow tries

to pull us apart.

We fought that day

through waves grown

strong and driven,

our fingers touched,

then a wave swept me

out of your reach.

You swam against the tide

and caught me.  You said,

"If we drown, we drown

together because I don't

want to live without you."

We both worked hard

getting out of the water,

but we held on to each other

knowing it was the only

way we would survive.

I lean over and kiss

your cheek, then run

my fingers through your

silky hair.  Your eyes meet mine.

I cry out silently,

“Don’t turn from again!”

Maybe my thoughts met

yours as you pull me

close to you.

You whisper,

“We won’t drown.”

Answer 5

Try writing what is in your heart, and it will be perfect.  Not someone else's thoughts and dreams, but yours.

Answer 6

like they always said. the best gift are the ones that was given from the heart. if you really want a poem to save your mariage, write exactly what your heart said. and let your husband know that it came from your heart. and make sure you tell him how much you love him.