Help me finish my poem? :)?

Question

She's falling for his gypsy curse

it's just like love but the reverse

and when it ends, she'll have it too

the curse that came with loving you

Answer 1

Forever, foever I will be true,

to you, to you babe only you.

Answer 2

i like the first answer!!that was pretty good!!!^^

Answer 3

Oh wow, that's nice! I don't think it needs anything else. You could put that on your myspace or something. Maybe make an avatar out of it.

Answer 4

and here is where the poem for you

ends here and no more

Answer 5

if you mean converting the words to sound like a song then I CAN lovely poem by the way FABULOUS i have the same probs email me if you want mi help dont change a word in that poem and KEEP writing

Answer 6

U got talen girl. U have an amazing start, i say keep on goin :) Good luck

Answer 7

its rlly nice

i dont think it needs anythig else:)

Answer 8

you could end it there and it will be find

i like it

Answer 9

all the love that comes with this

overwhems me as I'm bewitched

no can i have a bologna sanwich

Answer 10

I like it the way it is.

Answer 11

I would keep it there but in this lins

   "it's just like love but the reverse"

For "the reverse"change it to "in reverse" Good poem!

Answer 12

verrry good. r u good with music? could be a song aye?

Answer 13

wow thats actually good! to tell the truth i think you dont need to add anything!!! nice work!

Answer 14

I personally think it's good as is. And poetry isn't something that you really think about; it kind of just flows.

Answer 15

it's fine it doesn't need anything.

Answer 16

paths we ll share,

don't care,

every day a new door to beware,

only you have the key to care,

open my heard,

and you ll find a world,

reach your hand,

to see the new land,

its you, its me,

and....its FREE....

Answer 17

I like it, put it on myspace or facebook and ask for someone to make it a song. Good luck

Answer 18

youve already finished it

you need a middle

Answer 19

i love it the way it is :)

Answer 20

i don't think you need to add anything