Help me on my ENGLISH ESSAY on the paragraph pleaseee IM STUCKKK?

Question

Okay im doing a essay about a scary story, like this family goes to this hotel and they dont know thats its haunted....

well this is what i have so far...

outside the Le Pavillon Hotel it looked so beautiful.the crisp air blowing ever so often.the hotel looked liked a castle, magnifecent full of secrets. only if the family knew that the secrets the hotel held were not so beautful as the hotel itself.

what should i say next ????????? ...im so stuck help thank you!!!! =]

Answer 1

hey back again lol sorry wasn't able to respond sooner i was busy.

    okay well here it is i only am going to do 5 or 3 sentences.:

  (childs name) walked into the beautiful hotel she/he was breathless at the sight. her parents went to go check in. (childs name)just stood there then she/he saw something which made this beautiful hotel ugly and horrifying. a chill ran down her/his spine the air turned cold and for that very second. she /he saw a girl! not like any ordinary girl. it was a girl who was dead! she/he was speechless.she/he felt a hand clutch her /his shoulders she/he turned around and saw her/his  mother.

      i know i did more but oh well.hope you can go on now need more help just e-mail me.

Answer 2

have them checking into the hotel or maybe walking up to the room

Answer 3

Introduce the secrets:

As they entered the lobby, one of the secrets became painfully obvious, etc., etc.,

Only you can continue since you must have some idea of the secrets you want to write and blend into the story, right???