Help me out with a dragon deck?

Question

i havent made this deck but tell me if you think it would work

monsters

luster dragon X3

baby dragon

time wizard

lord of D. X2

divine dragon ragnarok

curse of dragon

gaia the fierce knight

dark magician

buster blader

red eyes black dragon

summoned skull

blue eyes white dragon X3

horus lv 4 [optional]

horus lv 6

horus lv 8

spells

monster reborn

lightning vortex

flute of summoning dragon X2

summoner's art X3

ancient rules X3

mausoleum of the emporerX2 or X3

reasoning X3

dragon's mirror X2

fusion gate X2

axe of dipair[optional]

traps

jar of greed X2

royal decree X2 or X3

fusions

thousand dragon

king dragun

gaia the dragon champion

dark paladin

black skull dragon

blue eyes ultimate dragon

5 headed dragon

Answer 1

this is my other name

the purpose of this deck is to try and draw either summoner's art, ancient rules,mausoleum of the emporer, reasoning,lord of D. or flute fo summoning dragon, to summon my powerful normal monsters

also by doing this i try to fuse like dark paladin and power him up or blue eyes ult.or whatever

i use horus lv 8 and royal decree and king dragun to almost eliminate everything

also i might put in some D.D.R to get back my removed from play monsters that i fused

tell me if you think it would work

Answer 2

you really should put axe of despair in there.

Answer 3

I give it a 10 but you should be able to make it even better once the 5D's Dragon starter deck comes out sometime late December 2008- January 2009.

Answer 4

Mu Mudah! (Its useless!)

1/10

go for this!

Monsters: 20

Blue-Eyes White Dragon (3)

Lord of D. (2)

Divine Dragon Ragnorok (2)

Luster Dragon (3)

Kaibaman (2)

Masked Dragon (2)

Horus Lv 6

Horus Lv 8

Decoy Dragon

Sagan

Spear Dragon (2)

Spells: 13

Dragon's Mirror

Polymerzation

Monster Reborn

Premature Burial

Lighting Vortex

Pot of Avarice

Enemy Controller

Book Of Moon

Nobleman of Crossout

The Flute of Summoning Dragons (2)

Burst Stream Of Destruction

Card Destruction

Traps: 7

Royal Decree

Sakerestu Armor (2)

Return From A Different Dimension

Negate Attack

Torriential Tribute

Mirror Force

Fusions: 3

Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon

King Dragun

Five God Dragon