Help me with my dark deck??????

Question

i want to take this deck to a regional so i need to know if it is good.

monsters:

21

dark armed dargon x1

dark grepher x1

dark magician of chaos x1

dark lord zerato x1

dark nephthysx1

dark knight parshathx1

dark horus x1

dark general freed x1

the dark creator x1

prometheus, king of shadows x1

mystic tomato x 3

necro gardna x2

armageddon knight x 2

phantom of chaos x1

snipe hunterx1

morphing jar x1

doomsday horror x 1

spells

15

heavy stormx1

shieldcrush x1

fires of doomsdayx1

burial from a different dimension x2

premature burial x1

monster reborn x1

book of moon x1

lightning vortex x1

smashing groundx1

enemy controllerx1

allure of darkness x2

the beginning of the endx1

dark eruption x1

traps

7

escape from the dark dimensionx2

mirror forcex1

dark illusionx2

return from the different dimensionx1

torrential tribute x1

any help or tips is greatly appreciated.

thanks

Answer 1

i think it's great

Answer 2

It's a good deck but you should put more trap cards.

Answer 3

Good Deck 9/10