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Help me with my poem!!! pleaseee?

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its going to be a song. but i only have one verse and a refrain. help me come up with the next part or give me an idea that would be...WONDERFUL! aha lol..

got a million people askin me why the earth spins

and whhy the wind blows in that direction

i just dont know the answers to your questions

so please wont you just leave me alone

and now im recieving the bad wrap

boy your such a good lier did you know that

you could get away with murder

making me serve your sentence

but like a blow to the head

like a bullet to the chest

you wont escape the pain

until my hearts at rest

and wherever you may go

clouds will follow in the sky

and when it rains on your parade

remember why

thats all i have so far. please go listen to the song if you have a minute at www.soundclick.com/konstantia

thankyou!!

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  1. yeah it's okay... i guess


  2. I WENT ON WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM AND I HEARD SUM OF UR SUNGS. THE ONES I HEARD WAS OK.

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