Help me with this poem please?

Question

Thank you for everything you do for me

And all the years you spent to make me happy

And I promise you that you will soon see

A successful woman who is not sappy

I’m sorry for all the times I made you upset

We have had our ups and downs

And for all the things I did that I regret

But we can put that all behind us now

For all the bad times there have been good

And I truly appreciate you for all you do

I know I should help you out more if I just would

And wait there’s hope, I think I shall change, and do what I say too

I know you are eagerly waiting for me to say

I love you mom and happy birthday! :]

Answer 1

i would change the last line in the first stanza to

The successful woman that I can be

Otherwise, really good! she'll love it.

Answer 2

So What Exactly Ypu Want To Kno about this poem ???