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Help me with this poem?

by Guest60727  |  earlier

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Well, it's actualy a song, this is a stanza from the song, it goes:

In the lives that we live

Are the choices

Written on our face

Like a dogtag

And in every strand of hair

Lies a story

About how the person was molded

I want a different word instead of "dogtag" but can't think of anything. Any other help is appreciated, too. =]

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  1. Maybe tattoo.


  2. well it doesnt seem like it could go into a song but try like the person other than me said tatoo like you could say

    In the lives that we live

    Are th choices

    Written on our face

    Like a permanet tatoo

    But in this one way

    Every strand of hair

    Tells a persons story

    About how the person

    Was brought up in there own way

    not trying to change it just something i thought was good but yhea

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