Help me write an intro!!!

Question

I want an intro here ... i really don't know how to write one without sounding corny..... advice! :)

There are three issues I feel strongly about and will fight for:

 Country student’s transition (I’m a country guy in the big city)

 Financially struggling students (I say again I’m a country guy in the big city!!!)

 And q***r students (secretary of the uni’s Pride Board)

I will:

 Strike the financial balance between vital student services and uni culture (Beer, Clubs and Sports)

 Seek reform wherever necessary and practical

 Fight for a fair pay for all union employees

 Be a responsible and safe pair of hands

Our university is great, but I know we can do better. I want to bring my fresh ideas and work towards an even better university.

Vote one _ _!

_ _ the union!

Answer 1

You really have done your intro here. ie Start by saying the things you feel strongly about, then go into the things you will do if given the chance.

"I would like to draw your attention to....."

" I feel strongly about the following...."

"my aim is to bring about the following changes because I feel very strongly about them..."

Answer 2

'There are three issues I feel strongly about and will fight for:'

A perfect intro that you have already done yourself.

It's good to keep it short and to the point.  People don't want to read reams - just the basic points which you have given and put over well.