Help my Yugioh deck be tournament ready Please!!?

Question

monsters

L. Jugitsu masters

2x Dekoichi the battlechanted loco motive

sangan

2x Mobuis the frost monarch

d.d warrior lady

Cyber dragon

twin-headed behemoth

morphing jar

spirit reaper

3x Hydrogeddon

d.d assailant

jinzo

exiled force

Zaborg the thunder monarch

CAius the Shadow Monarch

treeborn frog

Neo space Grand mole

Dark MAgician of chaos

SPELLS

Moster reborn

Lighthing Vortex

Brain control

Smashing ground

Mystical space typhoon

Enemy Controller

soul exchange

book of Moon

Nobleman of croosout

Heavy storm

Pot of Avarice

Premature Burial

Shield Crush

Foolish burial

Traps

2x Sakuretsu Armor

Torrential tribute

Bottemless Trap HOle

Mirror force

ALL fakes will be flagded

ALL those who help will get ten points

Thank you

Answer 1

it looks like a solid deck that I wouldn't mind dueling.  I see you're trying to get card advantage against you opponent with LJM and Dekoichi .  Maybe you should also try a raiza in the deck too.  most of the best decks I play against also don't focus around spell and trap cards very much, and they often use  spells and traps that can be chained, like bottomless trap hole and   phoenix wind wing blast, so since you have a jinzo already, I would take out the second mobius for the raiza or maybe another caius if you don't like raiza.

Answer 2

Alright cut it down to 40 cards. I would remove the dark magician of chaos, twin headed behemoth, soul exchange, foolish burial.

Add stuff like

marshmallon

another exiled force

another bottomless trap hole

Hope this helps.

Answer 3

its a general deck, with a few monarchs. you need to pick a theme. beat stick isnt competitive. you probably wont do too good in tourny play