Help please? for my acting class i was told to write a commercial to memorize...

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i need 2 more lines for it but this is what i have so far.

<start> Tired of WILD, UNCONTROLLABLE hair? Does it get frizzy with just a hint of humidity? Get yourself a bottle of Garnier Fructis Sleek & Shine! <end>

i need to add 2 more lines that say something like itll give you glossy, shiny smooth hair but i need a good way to say it.. any ideas??? oh any help to improve what i have is also appreciated! :)

Answer 1

I love it!

Good Luck! :D

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Answer 2

If you want  to look and  feel better about  your hair this is what you need.  Available at  a  drugstore near  you.

Answer 3

Are you supposed to use an existing product?

I would think that you would have to make one up.

Well anyways, i&#039;d probably go on with saying...

&quot;Tired of wild, uncontrollable hair? Does it get frizzy with just a hint of humidity? Are you looking for a hair product that leaves your hair smooth with a natural shine? If you answered &#039;yes&#039; to all these questions Then Garnier Fructis Sleek &amp; Shine is the product for you! Available at these fine retailers..etc, etc.. &quot;

Hope I helped!!

I had theater class where i had to do something similar.. just breakfast food. lol!!!

Answer 4

i really like heidis idea. i had another one but it was stupid so nevermind, just go with hers!

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