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Help with Language Arts!!?

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My class is doing these poems that are riddles. I wrote mine and I want to know if mine is good or not. If not then tell me how to revise it. I don't care if it's obvious. It has to have 9 lines.

thanx

I clean out your trash

and dispose of it.

I smell really bad

and move quite slow.

I carry things from big to small.

If I roll by

you'll surly die.

If you drive me

your job sucks!

The answer is: A Garbage Truck

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  1. Excellent job!  One spelling mistake:  it's "surely" instead of "surly"

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