Help with New Yugioh Deck?

Question

K, don't go rating and saying this is bad yet, just look at it and say what you think can be improved:

A big part of this deck focusses around Destiny Hero - Dasher. He can special summon monsters that normally require high tributes. I don't got too many of them, because if I cant use DH-D effect they are pretty bad. Fear Monger and Over Destiny=> Destiny Hero - Double Dude to bring him back in/in the game.

More explanations in aditional d

1 Blowback Dragon

1 Brain Control

2 Caius the Shadow Monarch

1 Dark Bribe

2 Dark Ruler Ha Des

3 Destiny Hero - Dasher

3 Destiny Hero - Double Dude

3 Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

1 Divine Wrath

1 Gravekeeper's Guard

2 Gravekeeper's Spy

2 Majestic Mech - Goryu

2 Mausoleum of the Emperor

2 Mobius the Frost Monarch

1 Morphing Jar

1 Pot of Avarice

1 Sangan

1 Solemn Judgment

3 Soul Exchange

3 Tyrant Dragon

1 Ultimate Offering

1 Heavy Storm

1 Monster Reborn

3 Over Destiny

1 Premature Burial

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

Answer 1

i think it's not a good deck, try this:

1 Blowback Dragon

1 Brain Control

2 Caius the Shadow Monarch

1 Dark Bribe

2 Dark Ruler Ha Des

3 Destiny Hero - Dasher

3 Destiny Hero - Double Dude

3 Destiny Hero - Fear Monger

1 Divine Wrath

1 Gravekeeper's Guard

2 Gravekeeper's Spy

2 Majestic Mech - Goryu

2 Mausoleum of the Emperor

2 Mobius the Frost Monarch

1 Morphing Jar

1 Pot of Avarice

1 Sangan

1 Solemn Judgment

3 Soul Exchange

3 Tyrant Dragon

1 Ultimate Offering

1 Heavy Storm

1 Monster Reborn

3 Over Destiny

1 Premature Burial

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute