Help with Yu-gi-oh Lightsworn deck Based around Celestia?

Question

First of all I wanna say that this deck is based around Celestia, LS Angel not Judgement Dragon. You can't just take a SJC Lightsworn deck and take out the Celestia and give me that, it doesn't work like that. If you wanna make this deck then you have to re think and re design everything. This is the deck.

Monsters: 21

3 Celestia, Lightsworn Angel

2 Garoth, Lightsworn Warrior

3 Jain, Lightsworn Paladin

3 Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress

3 Lumina, Lightsworn Summoner

3 Wulf, Lightsworn Beast

1 Aurkus, Lightsworn Druid

1 Marshmallion

2 Gragonith, Lightsworn Dragon

Spells: 16

1 Heavy Storm

1 Premature Burial

1 Monster Reborn

1 Brain Control

1 Mystic Space Typhoon

2 Pot of Avarice

3 Card of safe return

2 Foolish Burial

1 Reinforcements of the army

2 Monster Reincarnation

1 Swords of Reveling light

Traps: 3

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Threatening Roar

Plz rate out of ten and tell me fixes.

Answer 1

WOW : 0 get a life kid

Answer 2

Ok try these changes

- aurkus lightsworn druid

+ 1 garoth lightsworn warrior

10/10

Answer 3

it looks like a pretty solid build. i wouldn't run torrential bc of lots of swarm maybe a mirror force or another roar instead?

Answer 4

I hate people like that.......I like your deck.  You have a few too many spells though, and a few too less of traps.  For traps get a Mirror Force (if you can't sacarasu armor i believe it is), Ring of Destruction, since you don't have alot of traps Royal

Decree, Call of the Haunted, and something to negate magics like Imperial Order.

9/10

~~Happy Dueling, and good luck.