Help with the thesis statement?

Question

Children living and growing up with a mom and a dad that are married ,used to be traditional.Today the families you see are rarely together as married couples.In todays society theres single moms and dads that are seperated or divorced.The decision to have married or divorced parents isn't up to the child ofcourse,but have you ever thought what it was like just to just have one parent,or two? Personally, I have only grown up with one parent my whole life,and from staying at a friends house I realized some differences from the meals you eat, the relationships with the family and even the living arrangements.

i need one last sentence that is VERY clear to make a thesis statement.

help? im struggling.

Answer 1

Check your spelling and punctuations too.

Answer 2

That paragraph has too much in it.

"The nuclear family,consisting of two parents and children, used to be traditional. However, changes in society and culture have allowed for the non-traditional unmarried, divorced, and/or single parents to have one adult households that now tend to be the norm. This has created extreme differences in the lifestyles of children from these two types of families."

You can start your next paragraph following the introduction with your other sentences that are in the intro that you wrote.

Answer 3

Children living and growing up with a mom and a dad that are married used to be considered a traditional way of life. Today, the families you see are rarely together as married couples. In modern society, there are single moms and dads that are separated or divorced. The decision to have married or divorced parents isn't up to the child of course, but to some, a thought provoking question would be what it would be like to have either one or both of their parents. Personally, I have only grown up with one parent my whole life. From staying at a friend's house, I realized that in a home with two parents, various things can differ including the meals you eat, the relationships within the family and even the living arrangements.

That is my own version of the paragraph you just typed. I think if you want to add another sentence, you should split your last one such as: "Personally, I have only grown up with one parent my whole life. From staying at a friend's house, I realized that in a home with two parents, various things can differ including the meals you eat, the relationships within the family and even the living arrangements."

I hope this helped =]