Help with translation English-Francais?

Question

Ok guys i want some help!I am from Greece and my French prof is now in France pour vacances!Elle m'a envoye a postcard and now i must reply to her!Can anyone help me?>10 points easily for the best answer!

Dear Ms Veronique!

I just picked up your postcard and I am very happy to learn that you have a great time in Alsace!As far as i can see in the postcard the landscapes are absolutely magnificent and I admit that i want to have my next summer vacations out there!It seems to be a real paradise!

As far as i am concerned, I spent my vacations in Peloponese and I visited a lot of places!I swimmed a lot and i met many tourists including French!!!!!!!I wanted to communicate with them but I couldn't...

Unfortunately,i didn't find the time to do revisions in French but i promise you to study as hard as i can in the winter!I have the english lessons and my program is soooooo difficult that i can't find time to catch up with everything!But as soon as i finish my english i will devote to my french and pass the B2 with the best grade!!!!

Many greetings from Greece!

Have a great time and come soon so as to start lessons because i miss Le Francais!!!!!!!!!!

Bye!

This is the small letter and if you see any mistakes please do not hesitste to correct them!She should see how i use the french language without any mistakes but since i forgot a bit le francais(because of the summer)i need your help!You can also tell me what else to add in this letter so as to be even better!

merci beaucoup in advance!

Answer 1

I'm very sorry, I don't have the time right now to help you out, but just DON"T use the text from the answer you got earlier, it's full of mistakes. Wait for somebody else to help you out. Good luck!

Answer 2

Chère Véronique,

Je viens de recevoir votre carte postale et je suis très heureuse d'apprendre que vous passez du bon temps en Alsace. Comme j'ai pu le voir sur la carte les paysages sont vraiment magnifiques que je voudrai bien y passer mes prochaînes vacances! Ca ressemble à un vrai paradis!

En ce qui me concerne, je passe mes vacances dans le Péloponèse et j'ai visité beaucoup d'endroits. Je nage beaucoup et j'ai rencontré de nombreux touristes, dont des français. J'aurai bien voulu leur  parler mais je n'ai pas pu...

Malheureusement, je n'ai pas eu le temps de reviser le français mais je vous ai promis d'étudier le plus possible cet hiver! J'ai des cours d'anglais et le programme est si difficile que je ne trouve pas le temps de faire autre chose. Mais dès que je finirai mon anglais je me dedierai au francais et reussirai  ÃƒÂ  obtenir le B2 avec la meilleure note!!!

Amusez vous bien et revenez bientôt pour commencer les cours car le français me manque!!!!!!!

A bientôt!