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Here's another one. adults only please. its very long?

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my long narrative....

by: james k

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well, just south of cowtown

there's a place you have to see

It's a trailor park and kind of dark

if you know what i mean

It's just south a the loop

on a street called Anglin Drive

But if you pull in there

You might not come out alive

So let me tell you the deal

and what goes on down there

what lives and dies on anglin steet

should stay on anglin drive

and what's dead and buried on that street

should stay on anglin drive

When you turn in, there's some

burned out units on your left and right

And i swear sometimes I've seen gargoyles

Looking down with angry eyes

Make no mistake, youre headed to h**l

If you continue down that path

And if you go down in there

lies are true sometimes

devils could be gods

and the jokers are the clowns

what lives and dies on anglin steet

should stay on anglin drive

but what's dead and buried on that street

should stay on anglin drive

But any how, I went down in there

And sure enough, I met this gal

Suzi was her name

and once I went down there, everything

turned upside down

she was hanging out her laundry

and I was on my lunch break

sometimes we would chat

and sometimes i would score

but somehow, all a that

lead to something more

what lives and dies on anglin steet

should stay on anglin drive

and what's dead and buried on that street

should stay on anglin drive

yeah she had an old man

who was always at work or drunk

suzi said he was a punk

and when i busted his nose

he agreed and gave up his bunk.......

he was out and i was in

and, man was i ever in

she and i made love everywhere

on the floor the bed the couch

sometimes we made it outdoors

suzi was selling so much dope

sometimes i felt like her w***e

we had so much money

i quit my day job and became

the guy who answered the door

we buried coffee cans of cash

all around the yard

we also buried pistol whipped dead bodies

in that same grassy yard

but i never killed a dead-beat

woman or a man

i just made love to suzi

and sometimes answered the door

see, suzi had these two guys,

one was john and the other james

i never knew which was which, i just let 'em in

but they sold a lot of stuff

and i guess two of their boys didnt pay up

j and j, the joker boys, took things in their hands

one night they showed up with

these guys in their trunk

the dead-beats were both dead

tied and gagged, with bullets in their head

i dug a very deep hole

tossed 'em in, and laid them to rest

h**l, i even forgave their sins

but one day i went to taco bell

with a wad of cash in my pants

when i got back the park was lit up

LIKE A CHRISTMAS TREE

with red flashing lights to see

i went on south, took a left, then headed back north

i hit that loop and didnt look back

that is until the coast was clear

that night found me digging up

all those cans of cash

what lives and dies on anglin steet

should stay on anglin drive

and what's dead and buried on that street

should stay on anglin drive

suzi didnt know what hit her

she was just to stoned to know

yeah, we still talk sometimes

when shes allowed to use the phone

she's doing a forty

as are most a the trailor park

i got out with all the money

BUT my new girl doesnt like it

when suzi calls on our phone

but every time i try and sleep

i'm haunted by the sound

those gargoyles are screaming

'bout dead-beats under ground

just take my word, dont ever go down there!

what lives and dies on anglin steet

should stay on anglin drive

and what's dead and buried on that street

should stay on anglin drive

just take my word, don't ever go down there!

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  1. not an adult.... it ok, its not really what im inot as for poetry, but its ok


  2. It's long really long, I would consider that a story more than poetry, my opinion!  Good story, !!!  Cheers!!

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