Here is another....?

Question

Sleeping Awake

You drink the devil's wine and sell me words of a life I wish to breathe

Take down your shield show your soul of this struggle you hold

Smoking your cigarette to release the nerve and unlearn time

Control what is lost and find comfort in the affliction

Dance with life refrain pushing distrust and accusations

In a instant I somehow became a stranger to you and lying to myself

The confusions that hold me still, are searching for a way out

Missing every moment of the person I thought you were

The reflection of a image is now a delusion in my mind

Taking all my chances under this sliver moon lit night

With anger coming in like storm you mis-collect your assumptions

To be sorry you try to cry as the sky feels your pain

All of me falls to sleep to be alone to feel the uncertainty of my own home

As the oxygen leaves me peacefully I cant breathe in your presence......

Answer 1

This is far better than your other poem.  Correct "life refrain" to "life's refrain", "in a instant" to In an instant", "of a image" to "of an image", "moon lit" to "moon-lit", "like storm" to "like a storm", and "cant" to "can't".  You push the envelope with "mis-collect".

Again, good antithesis/oxymoron for a title :)

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