Here is my poem; Will you please tell me what you think?

Question

If you think its awful please explain why

If you like it feel free to explain why

I am in love with the Hero

I am in love with the Villain

I can't decide which side I'm on

I would fight for Gotham City

the question is would I fight to

save it, bring it to the light

Or would I fight to bring it down,

drag it into the night?

Am I symbol of justice

or a symbol of fright

The question is what

is wrong and what

is right?

Is the world all a botch job

gone horribly wrong, something

to be destroyed with the swipe

of a hand

Or is the world in all its imperfection

something to be saved, stopped

from extinction?

I am in love with the Hero

I am in love with the Villain

I ask you this one question;

who would you choose?

Something I wrote and I hoped you enjoyed

of course its about Batman and Joker and

what is the right choice.

Please tell me what you think!

Answer 1

That was actually really good. I see the correlation you were making by comparing it to Batman and the Joker. Really, really good.

Answer 2

I liked it..

go to untappedtalent.co.cc its my website, where i have posted many of the poems and songs I have wrote. I would love it for you to go and read some of them and give me some feedback.

thanks.

no this is NOT spam. I promise.

Answer 3

I think it is very evocative, the imagery is just so sublime. I cannot tell you how much that I love this. Truly talented!

Answer 4

It is interesting.  A little too long, see if you can cut out something you repeat too often.  Nice.