Here some poetry tell me what you think?

Question

He whispers into my ear/ If I am your hero, then you are my heroine/ The most powerful I have ever seen.

His words make me squirm/ My stomach is turning/ His words are sinking in my skin/ Like a tattoo or sin.

If only he knew the truth/ The various lies he has been told by me/ I love you/ There is no other man

He kiss my neck/ He whispers in my ear/ That as long as I am around he has nothing to fear.

Oh he is quite right/ I am a brand of heroine/ but not kind that rides with heroes/ I am the kind that drags you down/ gets its hold/ and never ever lets go

I am the kind that destroys life/ the sort that with one bite/ you'll never want to leave/ I plus through your veins/ I make you lose all fear/ I am the heroine and I am the villain

Answer 1

it's alright  

Answer 2

Wow you put so much ? into those words its hard to  describe but its intresting I like it!

please answer mine

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