Heres a song to my girl friend watcha think?

Question

I always remember

Drawing in Smoke

Every letter fades but your touch remains

We sing and dance until the crack of dawn

You beg just one more song

Ride home the car breaks down

With hands claspsed so tight we walk around

Do you remember?

*chorus*

I remeber when we were young

Sneak out late starry night

All the songs we sung

Chilly breeze, wont you hold me tight

And there we sat until the dawn came

Every summer night the same

*end chorus*

At the end of the I kiss you night

Get home and turn out the light

Your face shines in the darkness

Thinkin of ME Thinkin of You

To much to bear

The rain porus down as though the sky has a tear

Do you rember those times?

I remeber when we were young

*Chorus*

Sneak out late starry night

All the songs we sung

Chilly breeze, wont you hold me tight

And there we sat until the dawn came

Every summer night the same

*end chorus*

You meet me outside

Run to me without a sound

Tight in my arms as the rain pours down

In my ears the words I hear

You say I always remeber

Answer 1

so romantic you should sing it to her she will be thrilled your a great song writer by the way  

Answer 2

A nice romantic song. I enjoyed the chorus. The one pet peeve i have about songs and poetry is when the ending of a statement doesn't rhyme. Unless it's a rap song then of course you could make different weird sounds and twist the words to make it rhyme. >.> But the song is cute and romantic. Quite enjoyable over all. It would be nice to hear it with some music in the background. Did you sing it to her at all?

Answer 3

yea nice i think she will love it