Hey, I'm italian and I need your help! =o)?

Question

Here is a text I wrote for my teacher in order to improve my notes... May you help me and explain me what is wrong? I also would like to know what you think about this topic...

Will you PACS me?

2008. In the era after Will and Grace, Dawsons’ Creek and the dreadful The Secret Of Brokeback Mountain, homosexual love should be accepted as a natural feeling, all those stupid/ecclesiastic prejudices should be erased and every sexual discrimination should be forgot. Aha. And dogs should stop l*****g themselves (Gregory House).

In point of fact, the situation today is not that different than it was twenty years ago, but for a massive dose of hypocrisy that has slightly changed the general morale. What am I talking about? I am just saying that if twenty years ago you could hear stuff like “I would deny my son if he was gay”, today the music has changed in “Well, you know, I like g*y people, but I still think it is unnatural”.

Answer 1

In what way do you need help?  Do you need someone to correct your grammar?

Answer 2

I really didn't find anything wrong with it? It seemed like a really well written report to me...?

Answer 3

Send me a good bottle of wine!

Answer 4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8GB8wAXFH...

i speak italian so i answered your question in italian

Answer 5

way to long to read do you make good italian food?