Hey, I just wrote this poem. Can you help me with it? Is it that bad?

Question

Heey. Im 13 years old, last night.. around 2am I wrote like three poems. They just came to me. I dont know if they make any sence x) They're not very good..

Can you help me make this one better?

What do you think of it?

And What message do you get from it..?

When I read it to myself, I pause a lot. That helps it flow a little better.

^^

I dont know where I'm headed,

But I dont find myself afraid.

I've been so many plaecs,

But this time I have no say.

I walk from every morning,

Right through the afternood.

I dont even slow my pace,

When it comes to end the day.

I know I am not lost,

For I feel not regret or fear.

I dont know whern I'll get there,

I just let my heart guide the way.

I do not know the time,

For it does not matter much.

The month is a mystery,

Could be April, Or May.

I made a promise,

That I will keep untill I die.

No matter what may happen,

From this path I will not stray.

I follow every twist and turn,

I march proudly up every hill.

And even when I take a fall,

I know.. I'll always stay.

:P

Answer 1

its almost like your saying you want to make the most of life, and you want it to be an adventure.

its good when you think about it.  

Answer 2

You could make this a lot better by looking through it and finding the stanzas that contain similar ideas and compressing them. If you found a way to get your poem into two or maybe three stanzas it will be much deeper and more profound. Try some rhyme scheme and maybe watch your syllable count a little more. Spell Check. The idea is good, but try again with these parameters and see what you get.

Answer 3

2nd stanza

i walk every morning

right through every afternoon.

dusk nears and its time to end the day

yet i dont even slow my pace

stanza 3

for i feel NO regret or fear

stanza 4

I do not know time

stanza 5

Which will be kept until i die

stanza 6

I know...i'll never stray

Answer 4

Second line

But I dont find myself

change to

but I can't find myself

Or if I don't find myself

  

plaecs places

afternood afternoon

I made a promise

I will keep it until I die.