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Hey I need a good guy name to go with this small scene.?

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“What’s wrong?” He asked me.

“I’m scared.” My voice was shaky and could hardly level to that of a whisper.

“Don’t be.” I tried to find his eyes, but the moon was hidden behind the clouds and I could barley see the outline of them. His eyes were a golden color. “I’ll protect you.” His voice sent me away to Heaven; I scooted closer to him, my mummy sleeping bad making a funny noise as it rubbed against the floor of our tent.

A tree’s branch scraped against the side of the tent and I jumped out of my skin in fear of what it might be. “It’s alright, I’m here, I promise nothing will hurt you.” He unzipped part of his own mummy sleeping bag and put his arm around me. I got closer to him. He felt so warm, his hand made it’s way up my arm, then found my hair and started to run through it.

A wolf seemed to be scraeming at me. I tensed, my head now right by his chest. His sweater was a dark black color so I couldn’t really see it, I could only see the outline. His chin rested on the top of my head, I tried to get closer to him, but we were already as close as we could get. “It’s alright.” I relaxed; even if he was lying to me it felt reassuring.

My arm was out of my sleeping bag and lying on my side. He stopped running his hand through my hair and found my hand. Are fingers entwined and it felt like this moment would never end, like time had frozen over in this perfect moment.

My stomach was twirling, and nothing could ruin this moment, I thought.

When he breathed out the air would go down the back of my shirt, it felt warm, and I could almost feel the peppermint sent in his breath. I matched my breathing with his; he smelt good. We had been camping here for a week and he still smelt good. I could smell the smallest bit of fire on him, from the smoke the fire let out. I could smell a million different trees and bugs and waters and grasses on him. He smelt like a forest of his own.

Something moved behind me and he stiffened his hold on me. My fingers clung to his as fast as his tightened around mine. His arm was around my stomach and I knew that if we needed to run, he could haul me up and take off with me in his arms. I felt safe with him. Complete. “Get some rest. You’ve been up for two days now.” He spoke the words through my hair. “ I’m worried about you, and I wont be able to sleep until I know that you are having sweet dreams.”

I wanted to tell him how much I loved him. I wanted to kiss him, to hold onto him forever, but the moment passed all to quickly.

The tent ziper went up and a dark figure appeared before us glooming down upon us, we were facing death in the eye.

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  1. that scene sounds really familiar to a book i just read...

    how about Edward??


  2. Daniel

  3. Arthur

  4. Chance

    Atreyue

    Jem

    Ross

    Casper

    Jasper

    Edmund

    Calum  

  5. Whenever I need a name for a story, I first think of what the character is like, and I try to find a name that means something like that.  For example, I'm writing one thing where I need a character that's hard, dark, and cruel, so I named him Garrett, because it means dark spear.  I needed a last name for another character, who is timid, weak, and easily influenced.  I used the name "Hindley" because "hind" means deer.  

    Think of what your character is like, and then go to a baby name site.  Most of them will let you search for names by meaning.  

  6. Brandon

    Kevin

    Trent

    Drake

    Paul

    Chandler

    Chad

    Mark

    Ovani

    James

    Marcel

    Justin

    Vernon

      

  7. Try these:

    Trent

    Matt

    Jason


  8. um i really like Johnathan and James but those are the names in my story...

    you like mine... http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

  9. james? dennis?

    i'd say a six, you need to work on the language and spelling.

    what's the story gonna be about?

  10. tom.

    brandon

    jeremiah

    taylor

    matt

    brad

  11. IDK, maybe David?

    Oh and I really liked te story. It was suspenseful and descriptive.

    It just needs a few touch ups and it will be perfect.

    I definitley give this story at least an 8.

  12. Edward ahhah jk

    or um..

    yeah..

    Edward..

  13. how about coby, matt or dan?

  14. I like it! : ) It's all suspenseful! I think a name that would go well would be Gabe or Dylan. That's just my opinion. I've always liked those names. Hope I helped. Good luck with your story.

  15. You need something very masculine.

    How about Scott?  

    or Don?  or Ray?  or Jack?  or Morgan?  or maybe Wes?

  16. Dupraine

  17. Is this supposed to be Twilight fan fiction? Because it's a ton like Twilight, especially Eclipse.

  18. Dunno, Maybe.. Cory? Or Adam?

    Good Story Btw :)

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