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My seventh birthday was approaching, and I had called all my friends to my house to ensure that I have a memorable day. Mom was busy making the party arrangements, such as food, games, guest list etc . . .

Just one day prior, father took me to his friend's bakery shop, where we bought a giant white cake, which was ordered specially for the occasion. On the same day, while returning from the school, my elder brother bought a packet of balloons, of all colours -blue, green, white, red and yellow-. That poor fellow, he spent the whole evening filling air in them, and when I asked to volunteer, he replied

“Come on! It's you birthday tomorrow. Lemme do it. You help mom with the other things. I am sure we are gonna have a blast tomorrow, isn't it?”

Almost all the arrangements had been made, and we all were very tired, so we retired for sleep early.

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  1. it's great


  2. Story you said,not book!!!!

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