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Hey do you like my rap?

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Depth filled by meters, the knees deep, in the sea, reeled by litres

to breath no air, getting harder to breath to the death nearly near

the hearts filled with fear, with the minutes leading on strong mind keeps stronger

not long before its gone though, so he knows, from head to toe he feels numb, no more cold, hold on lung, popped, left one,

Ten seconds later rescued but no pulse runs

blood, on his tongue, blue lips, cold hands, two ropes,

and the plunge from the roof, hung,

by the truth, not suicide but murder in the roof, no one heard of it,

body buried in the bath alive head under the water

no longer than 10 minutes dead already,

listen to the cold heart that did this, position the body onto the hospital bed,

grave then lead, funeral, broken voices said, goodbye,

tears smeared down the face, that held, the little boy, from birth till he die,

mothers cry, for her only son, lost in the lies,

thought her son did this him self,

Because no one seen what he seen, if only it was a dream in his eyes.

The sky is now home, from h**l to heaven,

rose petals fell on his grave, a boy named Kevin,

written on his stone, held his name, in parade of the souls that lie deep,

in the ground, and every night that’s where his mother laid,

she cried till she died next to her son, now they are joined one heartbeat, at a time, there new life has just begun

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  1. yea its kool


  2. It's more of a poem than a rap.  Only because any type of flow is non-existent.

  3. it was nice. props.

  4. nawww i really like it =] it aint bout drugs, s*x and money like al the rest. This one actually has a deeper meaning and it's beautiful

    wait so did you make that up? if so then great job! don't quit the rapping

    xx

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