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Hey do you think this question seems ok if its not tell me what wrong with this?

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After cheating on the test, Carols had a guilty concious and decided to write a confession and accept his punishment.

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  1. concious is spelled incorrectly

    Is "Carols" a male name - because you say "his" punishment.


  2. Concept is fine just clean it up,

  3. hey, its perfectly alright...what ever u were planning to do next, go for it!

  4. 1. The name should be Carlos, not carol, as this is not a female person.

    2. The correct spelling is "conscious.

    3. You may want to put a comma between "concious" and "and."

  5. I suggest you use "conscience" instead of "conscious" because conscious is used to mean "awake" or "aware"

  6. Yes, however I would just had a quilty concious.:0)

  7. guilty conscious? And if Carols is a male name, 'his' is fine. You might want to remove one 'and' in the statement, though. Overall I think it's fine.

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