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Hey is this poem worth reading

by Guest64666  |  earlier

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its call

jezebel

wise woman once told me i was a queen

they said my smile shines and my walk is mean

they told me stories of bodies they sell

they bought me a silk dress and called me jezebel

they took me into the streets where i met a man named fred

he bought me a drink then took me to bed

he said

jezebel jezebel your juices are flowing

jezebel jezebel your body is glowing

my mother once gave me lipstick and heels

she told me when you see a fellow bow down and kneel

for he has money and gold for days

so jezebel just play the game he plays

then he says

jezebel jezebel your juices are flowing

jezebel jezebel your body is glowing

my daughter once told me i was a hag

she said my heart is worthless and my body was a bag

she couldnt look at me in the eyes

she made me cry

when she said

jezebel jezebel your juices are flowing

jezebel jezebel your body is glowing

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  1. It's a very sad poem. (I mean sad like crying, not like c**p!)


  2. It was well worth reading.

    It was also deep, yet somehow remaining shallow.

    Great message, great meter, great job.

  3. yes its very entertaining  but you might want to do a poem that dosnt rhym because sometimes that gives it much more meaning. did you write this peom?

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