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Question

do you like these lyrics for my ex i cant get over?

snow falls on the city white on white its the color of hope on an unforgiving night you kissed me into ruins sin on sin now ive gotta love your love letters written on my skin i cant tell the stars from the downtown lights if i said i was truly over you my heart would say amen but i give into the cold caress of 2 a.m. if i admit i cant get used to this will my heart break again as i fall into the waiting arms of 2 a.m. sirens weavin through the streets i must have missed your call gathering up these nights black on black i know your voice like its my own and it makes my heart go slack i cant tell the stars from the downtown lights if i said i was truly over you my heart would say amen but i give into the cold caress of 2 a.m. if i amit i cant get used to this will my heart break again as i fall into the waiting arms of 2 a.m.

Answer 1

Yes it's good but I got confused at one point, I think 1 line is too long, it kind of spoils the flow. I mean this one:

"sirens weavin through the streets i must have missed your call gathering up these nights black on black".

Good luck

Answer 2

They are really really good. (Y)