Hey rate my deck please and any advise would be appreciated?

Question

Monsters: 17

Don Zaloog

Blade Knight

D.D. Assailant

D.D. Warrior Lady

Injection Fairy Lily

Goblin Attack Force x2

Spirit Reaper

Slate Warrior

Marauding Captain

Exiled Force

Night Assailant

Mystic Swordsman Lv2

Jinzo

Sangan

Dekoichi

Cyber Dragon

Traps: 10

Mirror Force

Dust

Torrential Trubute

Widespread

Sakuretsu x3

Bottomless Trap Hole x2

Magical Cylinder

Magic: 13

Premature

Swords

Smashing ground

Heavy

Reinforcements x2

MST

Lightning Vortex

Brain Control

Scapegoat

Nobleman of extermination

Book of moon

Nobleman of Crossout

Answer 1

it's made up of basic/standard cards...base it off something like a deck out deck...i see the warrior stuff but no warrior helping cards like the a.forces or well armed tributes.there all lvl 4and below.Land D dragon would kill this deck

Answer 2

Great but do me a huge favor and take out ol' Mystic Swordsman Lv2 and try Lv4. 9/10.

Answer 3

its pretty good, id love to duel against this deck. couple things:

marshmallon is spirit reaper but better! so replace SR with it

extermination doesnt run well, replace with a dust tornado

book of taiyou is just as good as book of moon, so add one!  there, thats pretty good like that!

Answer 4

8.5 out of 10

Answer 5

pretty good 7/10. Drop the wide spread for a bottomless. Take out Nobleman of extermination for monster reborn.

You might want to but the gobiln attack forces down to 1. There are alot of bigger monsters that can come out fast so replace one with another cyber dragon or D.D. Assaliant