Hey this is a deck i just finshed building and i just wanted to get some tips. (please rate)?

Question

25 Monsters :

x2 Jinzo

x3 Caius

Raiza

zaborg

x2 Cyber dragon

x3 spell striker

x3 nimble momonga

x3 Hyena (almost same as nimbles)

x3 Marauding Captian

exild force

spirit reaper

marshmallon

treeborn frog

10 Spells:

Pot of avarice

Monster reborn

Premature Burial

Heavy storm

swords of revealing light

x2 reinforcements of the army

brain control

x2 emeny controller

5 traps:

x2 metal reflect slime

x2 sakurestu armor

bottomless trap hole

I know i need a mirror force, and im trying to get one on ebay. I was thinking of running another zaborg but i want to draw cauis' instead of zaborgs. I can just recycle the one zaborg if i wanted with pot of avarice. Anyway thats just my thoughts. please give me yours. thanks..

Answer 1

i'd give your deck a six out of ten bc you have no theme and i cant that deck doinn much dmg. you need a little less monsters and more traps, and you dnt need 2 jinzo's one is good enough. if your goin to have marshmallon in a deck then use the spell card that goes with him. and spirit reaper is a banned card.

Answer 2

it looks descent for a freshly built deck. i'd say DEFINITELY put in trap dust shoot, and mind crush so u can use them as a combo to get rid of 2 monsters from the hand QUICK. if u can try to get dimensional prison to replace the sakeretsu armors with, its way better. and then try to get a side deck together with some other monsters.

hope this helps, chris.