Hey you guys,can you all please tell me what you think of this poem?

Question

Unloved

Ever wonder what it feels like to be unloved

The wind suddenly stops to whisper

The sun decides not to shine

The sky turns gray and beneath all lies......

A lonely soul

Beautiful,vibrant,alive

But in the inside she cries softly, gently, alone

Unloved

Unloved

Unloved

Answer 1

Beautiful! So sad too. I hope you feel loved. Hugs to you =)

Answer 2

To be loved one must first learn to love oneself. That way it's infectious.

Answer 3

3rd line sun decides to . . . make it a one word verb as inline 2

Line 4 does not seem to fit , I would revise it

In line 7, take out she and leave the soul as it;s own and take out in the inside

But inside cries softly, gently, alone

Ever wonder what it feels like to be unloved

The wind suddenly stops to whisper

The sun decides  to .....

The sky turns gray and beneath all lies......

A lonely soul

Beautiful,vibrant,alive

But  inside  cries softly, gently, alone